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god in HD

Started by howard · 10 months ago

bathe us in your glow,
and the wisdom you allow
will be all we know. ... Continue reading »

3 comments

  • Great poem and very poignant. The word "allow" is brilliant.
  • It was easy once the image got planted in my head, courtesy of you ;)

    Tangentially, I've always enjoyed poetry where line-ending words are spelled the same but not pronounced so. That may have fueled the word choice a little.
  • I second qazse's compliment. I try so hard to ignore the call of the tv, but it's surprisingly addictive.

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